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A bonafide work of intricate art,
This lady doth hold the key to mine heart.
Forever it's locked, waiting in dark
For fair a maiden as her to rend it apart.
Lord grant me the patience and diligence to
Remain steadfast in all that I do unto You.
And let it be known, it's the righteous man who
Gain all in the Lord, and what his heart holdeth true.
Bless me, O Lord, as I walk with you now.
God, make me righteous. Please, show me how.
In the end I shall know of wisdom and love
And all that you give us from Heaven above.
This lady doth hold the key to mine heart.
Forever it's locked, waiting in dark
For fair a maiden as her to rend it apart.
Lord grant me the patience and diligence to
Remain steadfast in all that I do unto You.
And let it be known, it's the righteous man who
Gain all in the Lord, and what his heart holdeth true.
Bless me, O Lord, as I walk with you now.
God, make me righteous. Please, show me how.
In the end I shall know of wisdom and love
And all that you give us from Heaven above.
Written to accompany a photo which is now a scrap.
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I like how you've created the 'old' feeling, (KJV?) but not let it constrain your content, esp. in the last 3 lines. I don't know if it was deliberate, but at times your control of line length made it seem a little stilted - maybe don't get so hung up on balancing syllabul counts? But either way, i like it. C'est bien!! *grins*
Selamat tinggal
Hannah -the wierd one-
Selamat tinggal
Hannah -the wierd one-