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you.are.my.desire

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This has nothing to do with you.
Except everything that it has to do with you.
My soul felt the shuffling of your feet,
And that place seemed a little less dark.
In fact, the shell encasing that place
Became vastly brighter as well.

Words passed,
And time after time,
I found myself
In awe of your [positive] space.
The space I would grow to cherish
As it took away (the negative beside me).

Even at (f i f t y) feet,
You have this tendency
To desaturate the world around you.
Black/on/white, white\on\black...
And there, to contrast it completely:
Your soft skin and [ANGEL]ic golden hair.

a fort(K)night passed.
and we danced.
the desire came over me
to press my l(I)ps against your(S).
to follow through would have been fatal.
in more way(S) than one.

ASpotlightOverAPorch,
ATen-minuteEmbrace,
MascaraStainOnMyWhiteShirt.
[elements of the unforgettable]
EveningEnding.
...Letmeholdyouawhilelonger...

The only reason I walked away,
Was to keep from darkening
My own home's doorstep past one o'clock.
I would have held you till the end of Time
Perfection in a ten-minute hug
Is hard to come by these days.

You're beautiful [on the outside].
I fell for you a long time ago.
And supressing these [feelings]
Is, by no means, a simple task.
His light shines through in you, a rare quality.
You're beautiful [on the inside].

[you.]
[are.]
[my.]
[desire.]
[Xxxxx]
[Xxxxx]
This is an older deviation that I'm resubmitting, just in case no one saw it. I'm extremely proud of this piece and it would be a shame for it to be unread. Written for a girl who's goal in life is to glorify God in all she does, this piece reflects how I feel about her. I want her so much, I can taste it.
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JenniferStarling's avatar
That's fricking awesome!!!! I love typographical stuff like that! I can even get past this being romantic because it's so detailed/involved!!!